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  1. MrsJD666

    MrsJD666 Ruling the Devil Staff Member

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    This isn't one of my best works.. Not extremely inspiring.. More like last night, during my shift at work, I had nothing to do, so came up with this..

    Har lavz ko apni mohabbat se sajaya
    Likha ek paigaam apne meh?#@*&%!^$~ ke naam
    Socha kis raaste ise un tak pahunchayein
    Dastak khud hi de dete lekin
    Unke inkaar se dar lage
    Wo na keh kar zalim, bhul jate
    Hum us zulm ki saza zindagi bhar pate
    Aankhon ke aansu, dil ka dard unhein na dikhta
    Hum apne gamo ko apni kabr tak le jate
    Na jane gar wo ikraar kar dete to kya hota
    Apni mohabbat ko pane ki khushi se hi shayad hum mar jate
    Kash wo humare dil ke jazbaat samajh pate
    Jaan pate kis hadd tak unhein chahte hain hum
    Humein phir shayad koi paigaam likhna na padta
    Is intezaar me yu tadapna na padta
    Humari mohabbat ke phool unke dil me bhi khil jate
    Tanha, unke bina humein jeena na padta..


    This is probably the first time I am sharing something I wrote like this, so please be a little kind with criticism :)
     
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    JD666 RAID Leader Staff Member

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    muah!!
     
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    MOZ RAID Leader Staff Member

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    Well done! If this isn't your best, we'd surely love to read your best.
     
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    MrsJD666 Ruling the Devil Staff Member

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    Thank you..! :)
     
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    ManISinJpr Want to resurrect.. !!!

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    Bahut romantic hai !! :D
    like it.. do keep on writing MrsJD666..
    :D
     
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