And the fingers danced on the keyboard .... !

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  1. harryneopotter

    harryneopotter NEO is my middle name ! Staff Member

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    Shireen walked past the store at 1 pm every day. She knew Aditya would be busy with a customer. She also knew he would look up into her eyes, sending a secret signal of recognition. It was their secret romance. They never spoke to each other. Never smiled at each other. They were strangers who liked each other. Her heart beat faster every day their eyes met. She would dress up every day keeping his eyes in mind. He was her passion now. Her desire.

    Today was going to be different. She knew she had to take a step further. She would walk into the store and act as his customer. Her body tingled at the thought of his touch when he would hand her the hair oil she planned to buy. She was excited.

    At 1 pm she entered the store. He was standing behind the counter. She asked for the oil. He did not look at her. She waited for the signs of a smile. He did not give her one. She waited for their eyes to meet. He looked at someone else.

    Disappointed she left the store. Tears pouring down her face. If only she knew how he suffered. For today Aditya was asleep. Ashish had taken his place. He suffered from Multiple Personality Disorder. Ashish never recognized Shireen. And Aditya would never see her again.


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    JD666 RAID Leader Staff Member

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    Standing ovation! in this cold weather! Superb! We need some more of this stuff.
     
  3. harryneopotter

    harryneopotter NEO is my middle name ! Staff Member

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    ok...here is one lame attempt by me :

    [panel]In the morning, she was gone but her smell still lingered on to him. Wondering how in a single night, a stranger can change your world, he closed his eyes again. He could see himself, down on one knee, saying “I love you”. Then his mind asked THE Question “Wat was her name again?”. [/panel]

    It was for a 55 word story contest, the theme was "NAME" !
     
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    not repping you a second time, but it was great!!
     
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    harryneopotter NEO is my middle name ! Staff Member

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    lol...
    another one, this time the theme was "FEAR" !

    [panel]He was surrounded by men, as their leader, “The Butcher” moved towards him. The menacing eyes sent a shiver down his spine. There was no escape. The butcher threw his shiny weapon towards him. The wooden club in his hands moved, instinctively. The ball raced to the boundary. The crowd roared. The Fear was gone.[/panel]
     
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    You will know how to shoe horn cricket in anywhere. but good one none the less.

    Anyhow, came up with this while I was reading this thread, just now

    --- Double Post Merged, Jan 5, 2013 ---
    He sat in deep concentration, his eyes trying to find some point in the room to focus on. The noises outside distracted him but he tried to stay on track and put all his energy and effort in the one thing on his mind.

    'Plop' came the sound.. and a wave of relief came over him as he reached for the flush handle.
     
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    harryneopotter NEO is my middle name ! Staff Member

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    raat ko 3 baje ye aaya dimaag me ? ..... now i know where the phrase "pull ur mind out of the gutter" came from !
     
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    hey the important bit is that it was creative and the words came to me as i typed them out. Din't even draft it. :p

    How's it for a first attempt??
     
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    harryneopotter NEO is my middle name ! Staff Member

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    great start i will say !
     
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    ^^ are'nt you missing something then!!!
     
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    harryneopotter NEO is my middle name ! Staff Member

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    :confused:


    This ---> :kiss3: ?
     
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    lol! hell no!!
     
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    I applaud the fact that your wrote so much in this winter with numb fingers, especially after knowing how lazy you are. Tell me the truth, how many sitting did you take :p
     
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    Hey, whose keyboard is that?
     
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    ???
     
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    :wtf::whatisthis:
     
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    JD666 RAID Leader Staff Member

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    Don't know how many words this would come within, but I'll try and keep it below 100.

    He looked outside. They were everywhere. His house was surrounded on either side by Zombies. Blood thirsty, hungry for living human beings, they kept approaching at a constant pace. Not know what to do, he paced frantically around the house, searching for an escape, forcing his mind to think straight.

    "We've surrounded the Zombie in a house, Sir. Would you like us to capture or kill him?". "Take him alive" came the order. We need to study him to find a cure for this. They approached the house cautiously, the fear of confronting a zombie playing on their minds.

    100 words :)
     
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