The Poets Syndicate

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  1. Justsayit

    Justsayit RAID Rookie

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    Seems like its a purposefu poem ..cool
     
    Justsayit, Aug 19, 2012
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    Zombie's Home...


    Just like most of the things i do in my life,
    I dont make plans, I never planned anything.
    I never planned and probably that is why I never regret, I never remember.
    I just go where i want to go I just do what i want to do I just say what i want to say..
    Does it help to make life comfortable...
    No ?#@*&%!^$~ing way...it just ?#@*&%!^$~s it all up in a big fat way...
    And then I pick all shit up and walk till I feel i can walk as I have no destination anyways...
    And I reach somewhere and I find a home.
    A home that has adequate light and curtains to shut the light when i want it out of my face..
    I like it that way
    and I have taken good care to buy thick curtains that hide the sunlight
    so that it doesnt scare the worms that creep inside the house..
    I let them creep...here and there...
    Till they find a place and r happy to be with me...
    They have no idea that they are helping me and they shouldnt get that idea...
    Or else they will ask more food more curtains and more cold...
    I like sunlight sometimes and I like it to the point it burns my skin brown
    So that I remember it was there with me...it did touch me that long..
    I look at the tan and remember the bright sunny day...
    those days i dont put the curtains
    I let them hang loose and let the wind blow them like my hair...
    I have a mirror on the wall too.. Just near the window...
    I see the mirror and i see an image and it smiles at me..
    I have no idea who she is.. I have never seen those eyes...
    Who is she?? I thought my eyes were black... hers r a bit brown...
    when she smiles...she scares me.
    I dont like her smile. It seems she is having some good fun in my house.
    With my worms and the cold and the curtains that I placed to get the sunlight out.
    She looks happy...who is she????
    Does she knows this is my house???
    Anyway let her hang on that wall in that mirror.. I dont care who is in that figure..
    It must be the piled up shit from the past
    That I keep unlocked and let all have a peek
    Its time to break that mirror and put a glass frame there.
    With my picture on it. With my ?#@*&%!^$~ing bright smile.
    You see I smile a lot and they say I smile because i have a good set of teeth.
    I say I smile because I was told to do so...
    as when they click that picture I always felt what if it is that is the last picture of me.
    I care to look good or else they might come to know my curtains and the creeps I love to keep in my house.
    And no I dont want them to go. As they are my only company
     
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  3. fleshfragger

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    Interesting!
     
    fleshfragger, Aug 19, 2012
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  4. JD666

    JD666 RAID Leader Staff Member

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    Word censor! MOZ

    Sent from my XT910 using Tapatalk 2
     
    JD666, Aug 19, 2012
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  5. BANHAMMER

    BANHAMMER Teh Almighty BanHammer Staff Member

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    if these are poem, they better belong to poem syndicate thread.
     
    BANHAMMER, Aug 19, 2012
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  6. Justsayit

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    :( R U serious...really ..
     
    Justsayit, Aug 19, 2012
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    BANHAMMER Teh Almighty BanHammer Staff Member

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    Well, it's totally upto you, if you want to make them a part of bigger collection or want to have them as your own thread.
     
    BANHAMMER, Aug 20, 2012
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  8. Justsayit

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    I meant about word censor..how to post in poem syndicate,?
     
    Justsayit, Aug 21, 2012
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    The Fear of Lizards
    The lizard on the wall
    freaks me as i am not sure when it will fall
    when it moves on the top of the ceiling
    There is a strong probability it might fall
    As they some times just loose their grip
    Why i am yet to know ..will surely google it
    Once i was sitting on the floor
    I saw a lizard leaving its tail as if it was a funny game
    The tail kept dancing without ther body
    I mean ..n i was thinking it will be a boon if it happens with the human body,
    The lizard has a very great property
    If you dry its tail and smoke it :
    It can make you really naughty;
    Be careful , there are some really small tiny winny
    If they fall in your curry, don't eat it thinking chilly

    :giiggle:
     
    Justsayit, Aug 21, 2012
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    I think this poem was possibly the result of doing exactly that .. :p
     
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    merge will do done.
    --- Double Post Merged, Aug 21, 2012 ---
    Done Justsayit: both threads combined, now you can post here.
     
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    Hello Justsayit ..

    To quote a user post/reply you need to click the Reply Button on the bottom left.
    Clicking it once is enough(as sometimes its may take few seconds to appear). Clicking more that once will repeat the operation.

    This is what it looks like when you quote someone ..
    Code:
    [quote="dbg, post: 17207, member: 11"]I think this poem was possibly the result of doing exactly that .. :p[/quote]
    To add your reply after 'quoting' a user you must type outside the
    Code:
    [quote] blah blah [/quote]
Here is my reply
 
[quote] some more blah blah [/quote]
Here my reply to you tooo
    part.
     
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    :D
     
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    (Started writing this yesterday when I was alone, thinking while it rained. Completed it at work tonight..)

    I was thinking to myself
    Wondering how its come to this
    Wondering how things went wrong
    Wondering if its ever going to change
    Wondering if its ever meant to be

    And I saw you before me
    I saw you for the first time
    Your eyes so bright
    Your face so innocent
    Your confused look as I stared at you

    I never knew what it was
    But there was an instant attraction
    Something about you had me mesmerized
    Maybe it was whats called love at first sight
    So it happened to me, I dint even know

    I had fallen for you that day
    That very moment I saw you
    It was raining then
    And today, its raining the same
    Yet there’s nothing same about today

    We became friends easily
    Came close without trying too hard
    But only if I knew the truth
    That I wasn’t the one for you
    You had loved another the whole time

    I thought you were true to me
    Never realized you dint even say it
    I heard what I wanted to hear
    Saw what I wanted to see
    Imagined what I wanted to believe

    And then it rained one day
    Getting soaked, I watched you leave
    All my dreams were washed away
    You dint even look back once
    And I’d thought you’d never walk away

    Something inside me was broken
    I could never describe that pain
    My world had come crashing down
    I was left behind that day
    Yet I don’t think you ever knew

    You never knew how I felt
    Never saw it in my eyes
    You dint know how I loved you
    I dint realize I had to say it first
    I always thought you loved me back

    I was too crazy about you
    You were mad about another
    I was too blinded to see the reality
    When I did, you were already gone
    I saw now, your life was somewhere else

    And today, I stand here alone
    I am thinking to myself
    How it rained the day I saw you
    And today, its raining the same
    But there’s nothing same about today..


    As requested by fleshfragger. This has been posted here.
    P.S. I just copy-pasted the post so please dont mind if there was anything that I should have edited :p
     
    MrsJD666, Aug 28, 2012
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    I never believed in Magic before...

    I never believed in Magic before
    Till I realised I am Magical
    And everything that was impossible
    Was mystically possible
    I never dreamt that I will fly
    Till I realises I can fly
    Because the flight that I have wished
    Needs more than wings to reach the sky
    My world is not a fantasy
    Its a reality full of possible dreams
    Ifs are not my plans of actions
    Will is all that I can see
    I don't see why should stop my way
    And I don't like won'ts to argue rationality
    I have no space for a maybe
    Because my will makes way for me
    I don't hate and that's my policy
    I try to change if there is a need to be
    If only you could fly with me on the wings of possibility
    You would have seen what are dreams to die and live and worth to be...

    Sonali Shetty
     
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    What the hell is wrong with you that you have tampered my poem..its a word used not for any one particular..if U have some sense of literature and art you wouldn't be tampering someones writing..sad..read my words &%%£#
     
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    it is an automatic system of censoring the words, you can bypass it by using alternate spelling.
     
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    Relax! :giiggle:
     
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    An item in the morning newspaper
    gave us all a hearty laugh
    Poverty in INdia it said
    Has come down by half


    If poverty is just lack of food
    The report is probably right
    Indian farmers now grow enough food
    By toiling day and night

    Poverty is just lack of calories
    Is what the world bank says
    I think poverty can be judged
    In many different ways

    There is poverty of honesty in our own polity
    and poverty of decency in the masses
    THere is poverty of vision in our planners
    And poverty of sympathy in top brasses.
    One day surely decisions will be made
    because the cause is right
    one day surely ppl will never
    fight over a religious site

    One day to get your work done
    you wont have to grease any palm
    and telivised debates in parliament
    will be incisive cogent and calm

    One day surely a woman can go out
    Alone and without any fear
    And in the office she wont have
    any indignities to bear

    One day surely in search of jobs
    People will not flock to a town
    only then , my friend, I will proudly say
    Poverty in india has come down
     
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